# Week n+17¶

## Monday-Tuesday 25-26/10¶

### What I did today:¶

• I’ve put my thesis aside while all the feedback starts to pile in and and have mostly been working on trying to slam out my PhD proposal. The feedback that I have been getting has mostly been positive, though some of the non-comp feedback has been a bit disheartening to receive.
• AAAANDDD submitted.
• I plonked in a park and started to work through some of the feedback this arvo

## Wednesday-Friday 27-29/10¶

### What I did today:¶

• So I got my feedback from Katya and there is a lot of red, so I guess my post-draft submission break is over now.
• I’ve put the feedback from everyone else aside while I focus on this, since it’s going to be me changing most of my stuff in the first place.

• Review the few red points left in the thesis (it’s just the intro atm)
• Finish off the rest of the drafty first edit, including all of the front/tail matter
• Implement feedback suggestions
• Sophie
• Peter
• Alexandr
• Katya - in progress
• Add more discussion with comparison to literature
• Review the paper by Wang et al. to find any other analysis that you should perform, or any other things that should be discussed.

#### Writing Matrix¶

Section Status
Abbreviations Removed
Abstract Reviews implemented
Intro Reviews implemented
Computational details Reviews implemented
Reaction benchmarking Reviews implemented
Static $$F_Y$$ Reviews implemented
Static $$F_Z$$ Reviews implemented
Static $$\varepsilon_r$$ Reviews implemented I think?
Efield Scans First draft done
EDD maps First draft done
Relaxed $$\vec F$$ First draft done
Derivatives First draft done
Final Benchmark First draft done
Conclusion First draft done
Acknowledgements First draft done